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Model Composition - An unexpected event at a picnic
When it comes to storytelling, the rising action is a crucial component that often goes unnoticed by students. The rising action serves...
Edward Kwan
Jun 17, 20241 min read
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Model Composition - Regret
Motivating students to use better language is daunting - despite the scaffolding, some simply choose not to do so, prefering to coast by....
Edward Kwan
May 20, 20245 min read
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Model Composition - A mistake
“Finally, I’m home! I’m starving.” Tossing my bag aside, I made a beeline for the kitchen, my stomach rumbling like the roar of a...
Edward Kwan
Apr 24, 20244 min read
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Model Composition - Something that was forgotten
"Linus, I'm really really sorry," I muttered, wringing my hands as an overwhleming sense of guilt consumed me. However, my words were...
Edward Kwan
Apr 2, 20244 min read
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A Primer on Show, Don't Tell - Worry / Concern
1. "This is troubling," I whispered, a wave of unease washing over me as I glanced around the room for reassurance. 2. "How can this be?"...
Edward Kwan
Mar 13, 20241 min read
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Model Composition - Write about a time when you were on a holiday
"I told you that shortcut was a bad idea! We were supposed to be in Kanazawa, and now look where we are," my mother chided, the worry...
Edward Kwan
Mar 10, 20245 min read
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A Primer of Show, Don't Tell - Fear
I have been exploring this on Facebook Some students are still looking for more examples to guide them along on this journey so here's a...
Edward Kwan
Feb 21, 20242 min read
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Model Composition - Being Responsible
Written by A Edited by Mr Kwan “Tom, I’m leaving now! Don’t let anyone in,” Mother reminded. Just before stepping out the door, Mother...
Edward Kwan
Jan 28, 20244 min read
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Mastering PSLE-Tested Verbs of Perception: Adventures in Seeing, Hearing, and Spotting
Ahoy, young language adventurers! Today, we're setting off on a thrilling expedition into the world of verbs of perception, with a...
Edward Kwan
Sep 6, 20232 min read
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Let's Explore Magical "If" Sentences: The Three Conditionals Made Simple for Primary School Wizards!
Hey there, young word wizards! Today, we're diving into the enchanting world of grammar with a special focus on "If" sentences, also...
Edward Kwan
Aug 29, 20232 min read
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How to avoid mediocre compositions
In the world of storytelling, whether it's a gripping novel, a thrilling movie, or an engrossing TV series, one crucial element that...
Edward Kwan
Aug 27, 20231 min read
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Model Composition - A mistake
Language is the heartbeat of any captivating story, breathing life into the imagination of both the writer and the reader. It serves as...
Edward Kwan
Aug 24, 20232 min read
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Description Boost #1 - Camping
Using the 5W1H approach in writing often results in dry and flavourless sentences. Using that as the guideline, it's not uncommon to see...
Edward Kwan
Jun 16, 20231 min read
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Can there be too much vocabulary in your composition?
For those who want a wonderfully written section sprinkled with language and literary devices, this is not it. This is a one stuffed...
Edward Kwan
Jun 1, 20233 min read
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Commonly tested composition themes
Getting prepared for Continuous Writing in Paper 1 is not as scary as you think. Have an overview of the potential questions. - they are...
Edward Kwan
Feb 4, 20231 min read
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Taking time to flesh out the climax
One of the biggest mistakes students make is rushing through the story. They form points using 5W1H but they are reluctant or forget to...
Edward Kwan
Jan 3, 20231 min read
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Composition for Primary 1-3 (Lost Wallet)
This will be useful to help your child pick up the basics of story flow - to understand how the introduction transits into the problem. ...
Edward Kwan
Dec 9, 20222 min read
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Edward Kwan
Sep 27, 20210 min read
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